First draft of a short poem I made as an extra for my portfolio.
I don't like it that much ( I mean I did write it in five minutes right before I had to hand it in) but I wanted to record myself to hear what can work better. And there is a lot that needs work. So here goes my very shitty first draft via webcam. by the way guys forgive me for my annoying voice. I sound like I'm 12. AWESOME.
So there it is. Any Suggestions?
Monday, May 17, 2010
"Envelopes"
Posted by Mangolilly at 2:46 PM
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1 comments:
very excellent poem. I liked it a lot. it takes a lot of courage to bring up something that is not very talked about, yet fairly common. takes a lot of strength to do that. thank you for sharing and i hope this becomes a usual occurrence for your blog. keep them coming!
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